Monday, October 13, 2008

Shadows

Shadows wax and wane here
Like a candle's slowly melting energy
My soul flickers
I am the firefly flying outside my bedroom window
Shadows wax and wane here

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Mouse,

This is beautiful. I have a new one I posted Sunday. Check it out. I'm going to read it at Alberta tonight. I'll be around on Saturday too.

Cuidate!

dp said...

Hi, Mouse! This one is quite good. I like how you remain focussed on the one idea and you illuminate it without cliché. I hope you are doing well, I'm glad you have found time to post.

See you!
-Dawn